Rate my Blackwing deck por favor?

i've played yugioh for a long time and am just now getting into tournament style of dueling. ive decided to start working on a blackwing theme recently. comments and suggestions in any format would be greatly appreciated.

Blackwing Build

monsters
3x blackwing-shura the flame
3x blackwing-kalut the moon shadow
3x blackwing-bora the spear
3x blackwing- fane the steel chain
3x blackwing-mistral the silver shield
2x blackwing-sirocco the dawn
2x blackwing-blizzard the far north
1x gorz the emissary of darkness

spells
2x black whirlwind
1x heavy storm
1x mystical space typhoon
1x natural tune
1x against the wind
1x book of moon
1x upstart goblin
1x hammer shot
1x allure of darkness

traps
1x sakuretsu armor
1x call of the haunted
2x jar of greed
1x xing zhen hu
1x delta crow-anti reverse
1x trap stun
2x threatening roar
1x level retuner
1x half or nothing

side deck(not enough synchros yet)
1x Blackwing Armed Wing
1x X-Saber Urbellum
1x Sea Dragon Lord Gishilnodon
1x Ancient fairy dragon

it needs alot of help i know.
thanks!





Answer :
you need this cards
gale the whirlwind
raptor wing strike
icarus attack
delta crow anti reverse
dark erruption
dark creator

The Blackwing's effects are focused around Swarming and changing the ATK or the DEF of monsters on the field. Because of that, they have an aggressive playing style





Answer :
yahh u need help
monster:
- 3 fane steel chain
- 1 misrtal silver sheild
+ gale the hurricane
+ 3 vayu the emblem of honor
+ blizzard the far north

spells:
-natural tiune
-against the wind
-upstart goblin
-hammer shot

+2 swellows nest
+ brain control
+ mind control
+ allure of darkness
+ blackwhirlwind

traps:
-sakurestu armor
- 2 jar of greed
- xing zhen hu
- trapstun
- level returneer
- half or nothing

+ 3 icarus attack
+ solemn judge ment
+ 2 bottemless trap hole
+ threatning roar

there yah go!






Answer :
I am currently working on a blackwing my self. Now if you want this deck to run like it's supposed to then here is some things you can do
and btw, this is advanced format = the best format rofl.

- 1 natrual tune
- 1 upstart goblin
- 1 hammer shot
- 1 sakuretsu armor (This card is pointless in this deck, your defensive traps come from the threatening roars)

- 2 jar of greeds (your draw power comes from the allure of darknesses, jar of greeds are not needed = dead draw)

- 1 xing zhen hu
- 1 trap stun (never run 1 of these. 2 or none is the way to go)
- 1 level returner
- 1 half or nothing
- 1 gorz the emissary of darkness
- 3 blackwing fane the stell chains
- 1 blackwing shura the blue flame

and add these

+ 1 mirror force ( a GREAT card to clear your opponents field of monsters for you to swarm during your turn and hit for game )
+ 1 torrential tribute
+ 1 solem judgment
+ 1 allure of darkness (maximum of two in the deck)
+ 1 book of moon ( 2 in the deck )
+ 1 giant trunade ( this may seem pointless but let me share a quote with you "giant trunade wins games!" and its true, use it and see what i mean )
+ 2 Dark eruptions
+ 1 brain control ( great card in just about any deck )
+ 1 Lightning vortex ( good for clearing their monster field )
+ 1 Raptor wing strike ( To be honest, there are a couple way better cards to use in place of this one, but it still works with black wings )
+ 3 blackwing gale the whirlwinds ( a must have for this deck )
+ 1 blackwing blizzard the far north ( 3 in the deck )
+ 1 morphing jar ( not many people see the use in this card for this deck, but it helps. And can re stock your hand with kaluts and gales )

and as for synchros:

try to get ahold of
+ 1 thought ruler archfiend
+ 1 colossal fighter
+ 2 stardust dragons
+ 1 goyo guardian
+ 1 blackwing armed wing
+ 1 black rose dragon
+ 1 blackwing armor master

This deck should run a WHOLE LOT BETTER if you made those changes. I'm glad i could help, and if you need anything els just hit me up.