YuGiOh > Rate/Fix my Zero-Turbo Deck for Tourney?

Monsters (18)

1 Dark Armed Dragon
1 Gorz the Emissary of Darkness
1 Raviel, Lord of Phantasms
1 Destiny Hero Plasma
1 Destiny Hero Dogma
1 Plaguespreader Zombie
1 Elemental Hero Stratos
2 Krebons
2 Deep Sea Diva
2 Destiny Hero Malicious
2 Destiny Hero Dasher
3 Destiny Hero Diamond Dude

Spells (18)

1 Mystical Space Typhoon
1 Heavy Storm
1 Brain Control
1 Lightning Vortex
1 Allure of Darkness
1 Emergency Teleport
1 Future Fusion
1 Phantasmal Martyrs
2 Reinforcement of the Army
2 Miracle fusion
3 Ojama Delta Hurricane
3 Advance Draw

Traps (4)

1 Mirror force
1 Torrential Tribute
2 Bottomless Trap hole

Extra Deck (14)

1 Destiny End Dragoon
1 Red Dragon Archfiend
1 Black Rose Dragon
1 Thought Ruler Archfiend
1 Goyo Guardian
1 Colossal Fighter
1 Mist Wurm
1 Brionac, Dragon of the Ice Barrier
2 Elemental Hero Absolute Zero
2 Stardust Dragon
2 Ally of Justice Catastor





Answer :
try to work in. 2/3 GK spy. 1 rescue cat. 2 Xsaber air bellum a summoner monk and sangan. Just ideas though.

Also, why do you have Ojama Hurricanes? Take those out and throw in some more traps. Also try to put in a Destiny Draw

Take out Phantasmal Martyrs and the 3 advance draws. Fit it more traps and put in a few monsters. Try to work in a few from the listed I just gave.

Guys, this my poem for someone.. I have modified it a bit after the first posting.?

But i could not change most of it as i feel very attached to it for many reasons. Although i tried to cut down on the obsessive writing as that was not the idea but if i can improve anywhere do say!!! :D

Sometimes I wish I could just tell her,
That it’s not so easy and the feeling never goes,
I am stoned madly in love with her,
I cannot break free,
I see walking angels in many places,
Like she’s watching me from a distance,
And she reached out for my hand but clutched my heart.
Losing myself in love is what I most feared,
But it wasn’t love until I felt the urge to see her everyday,
Now I think about her night and day,
Paining me to know that she is not sitting by my side,
To watch her infectious smile cure a weakling child,
That I fall in love too easily,
Like when she plays with her hair,
And as she pulls her fringe away from her face,
It’s like a view from the bridge,
Because of her, I write these love-struck lines
‘I want to run my hand through your locks, clutching onto your face
Pull your head toward my lips, a closer look at the Mona Lisa,
I see your beauty running wild on your face,
Beauty like the night, I could tell you all night,
‘Your appearance is like a sunset on the west coast,
Your sweet tender words still roam my thoughts,
Your glowing eyes stealing away at my sight,
That your sensual lips are a beauty like no other,
Your alluring kiss, like magic so delicate,
That is poetry in movement that you leave with your touch.’
Yet your lustful hair pierces through my heart,
How your breath running down my neck tickles my soul,’
Holding you so tightly, won’t let you go,
Then I bite your candy-like ear,
To whisper sweet nothings to you,
And to tell you that it doesn’t cost a fortune to connect to a woman like you,
That I would carry a torch for you,
That I have great passion for modern art like you,
That Picasso modelled girl in a chemise on you,
To say the creation of Eve was inspired by you,
That you may know I am enamoured of you,
How I would fall off the edge of the earth for you,
That I would cross the seven seas for you,
That I learned love me tender on guitar for you,
The day would haze, the air bluing without you,
I am more than enthralled by you it’s true,
Clear as crystal, I thought you knew,
I guess all I ever wanted to tell you was that I love you too





Answer :
That's so beautiful.
This chick is lucky must be flattered.





Answer :
You don't have to change anything ! it's amazing :O
You said it all :))





Answer :

Bravo, I love it! Maybe we can exchange thoughts on poems sometimes! I love to be inspired!