Rate and fix my tele-dad deck plz!!!?

Well this s my tele-dad deck... please fix it and rate it as well...:D

monsters X18:
dark armed dragon
gorz the emissary of darkness
destiny hero plasma
caius the shadow monarch
armgeddon knight
cyber valley
necro gardna
krebons X3
gale the whirlwind
dark creator
mystic tomato
snipe hunter
grave squirmer
sangan
breaker the magical warior X2

spells X14:
allure of darkness X2
book of moon X2
gold sacrophagus
mind control
brain control
nobleman of crossout
swords of the revealing light
lightning vortex
heavy storm
mystical space typhon
smashing ground
enemy controller

traps X8:
sakuretsu armor
solemn judgment
treatening roar
shadow spell
torrential tribute
dark illusion
bottomless trap hole X2

synchros X15:
power tool dragon X2
ancient fairy dragon X2
black rose dragon
stardust dragon X2
red dragon archfiend
armory arm X2
x - saber urbellum
psychic lifetrancer
colossar fighter
gaia the force of the earth
sea dragon lord gishilnodon





Answer :
first take out plasma and add 2 destiny hero malicious,
take out dark creator, grave whatever and snipe hunter.

add 2 dark grephers and add another armageddon knight

for spells, take out the gold sarco, nobleman, swords, lightening vortex, smashing ground and e-con

and add emergency teleport and reinforcements of the army, and destiny draw

for traps, take out the sekaretso armors, the shdow spell nd the dark illusioh

this deck was nasty i mean come on, you considered it a teleDAD?

and you didnt haveemergency TELEport?

here is the real teleDAD deck list

mosnters
dad x 1
d hero malicious x 2
krebons x 3
caius the shadow monarch x 1
mystic tomatoe x 1
dark grepher x 2
armageddon knight x 2
sangan x 1
breaker x 1
e hero stratos x 1
gorz x 1
plaguespreader zombie x 1
necro gardna x 3
d hero diamond dude x 1

spells
destiny draws x 2
allure of darkness x 2
emergency teleport x 1
call of the haunted x 1
reinforecments of the army x 1
brain control x 1
mystical space typhoon x 1
heavy storm x 1
smashing ground x 1

traps

solem judgment x 1
phoenix wing wind blast x 2
bottomless trap hole x 2
royal oppresiojn x 2
trap dustshoot x 1
torential tribute x 1


play teledad right